RE: Adverbs, good or evil?

Subject: RE: Adverbs, good or evil?
From: Arlen -dot- P -dot- Walker -at- jci -dot- com
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Thu, 10 Feb 2000 09:48:05 -0600


>I kind of like b. Suggestion: leave out 'burning', it does not really
>invoke a response.

While we're on the subject, wouldn't "evoke" be better than "invoke"?

;{>}


Have fun,
Arlen
Chief Managing Director In Charge, Department of Redundancy Department
DNRC 224

Arlen -dot- P -dot- Walker -at- JCI -dot- Com
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