Dubya style sentence formulation

Subject: Dubya style sentence formulation
From: Matt Floyd <Floyd -at- ORsoftware -dot- com>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Tue, 31 Oct 2000 20:34:04 -0500


"Select the Group Name that you want to change the item order for."

"Select the Group Name for which you want to change the item order."

They both stink.


An answer I wait with anticipation for... wait, lemme rephrase that...

Matt Floyd
Surgical Information Systems

Matt Floyd
Surgical Information Systems

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