FW: Dubya style sentence formulation

Subject: FW: Dubya style sentence formulation
From: "Susan Ahrenhold" <sahrenhold -at- winspc -dot- com>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Wed, 1 Nov 2000 09:55:43 -0500

Check to see if the items are in the desired order.
If not, check the Group Name you wish to change.


"Select the Group Name that you want to change the item order for."

"Select the Group Name for which you want to change the item order."

They both stink.


An answer I wait with anticipation for... wait, lemme rephrase that...

Matt Floyd
Surgical Information Systems

Matt Floyd
Surgical Information Systems

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