RE: Sentence Structure

Subject: RE: Sentence Structure
From: "Leslie Johnson (Wasser)" <a-leslij -at- microsoft -dot- com>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Fri, 10 Nov 2000 13:16:38 -0800

<snip>How do I fix this sentence:</snip>

Here's one possibility:

In Empower runtime, when an item receives focus in the Funding Checklist,
the cursor automatically moves to the underscore character(s) in the item

1. Do you need the In Empower runtime phrase?
2. Can the 2nd "text" be described differently? Perhaps item description?
3. You could split the discussion - the 1st discussion could talk about how
the cursor automatically moves to underscore character(s) in *any* item
text. The 2nd discussion could discuss the cursor movement for the Funding
Checklist item text specifically.
4. You could show a picture, if that'd help.

Leslie Johnson

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