RE: Active versus passive (WAS Displays versus Appears-Which One? )

Subject: RE: Active versus passive (WAS Displays versus Appears-Which One? )
From: John Posada <jposada01 -at- yahoo -dot- com>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Thu, 21 Dec 2000 11:14:35 -0800 (PST)

I agree with what you say. I just thought there was some special
process known as "detirmining" that I'd never heard of.


--- "DeGuzman, Kathi" <Kathi -dot- Deguzman -at- Nextel -dot- com> wrote:
> Sorry, I could not figure out a better way to describe what I
> wanted her to do. Here is the long version...
>
> My daughter had written her essay on what she does to get ready for
> the
> holidays. The page contained several sentences describing things
> that she
> did. I wanted to know how many paragraphs she had written at that
> time. She
> looked at me like I asked her where we were going to put our new
> pet
> elephant, that is as if I was crazy. She did not know where a
> paragraph
> would begin and end. She could not tell me that a paragraph usually
> expresses a single thought, starting with a topic sentence. ---
> etc. Isn't
> that basic English? Shouldn't young kids be taught this kind of
> information
> in grade school?
>
> Kathi Jan DeGuzman


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