RE: Questions about marketing copy

Subject: RE: Questions about marketing copy
From: "Paige Pitsenberger" <ppitsenb -at- itgs-presearch -dot- com>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Fri, 1 Jun 2001 13:01:05 -0400

:: This is the sentence that bothered me the most:
:: >So you can get to where you're
:: > going and get on with life.
:: Diane Evans

I agree. Fragment or not, I don't see where even the phrasing brings any
positive value to the ad.

Paige Pitsenberger
Technical Writer/Editor
Presearch, Incorporated


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