Help: Beauty is what Beauty does

Subject: Help: Beauty is what Beauty does
From: Kirby_Sarah <Kirby_Sarah -at- bls -dot- gov>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Thu, 13 Sep 2001 17:50:29 -0400

Could someone help me to rephrase the following sentence to something a
little more businesslike:

"The beauty of option 1 is XYZ."

I want to take beauty out of the picture and say something more like, the
main advantage or something.

-Sarah Kirby
BLS LAN Support
Documentational Specialist


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