RE: Help: Beauty is what Beauty does

Subject: RE: Help: Beauty is what Beauty does
From: Jim Shaeffer <jims -at- spsi -dot- com>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Fri, 14 Sep 2001 08:33:33 -0400


The benefit
The most important benefit
Option 1 delivers $1,000,000 in projected profit

Benefits and money are businesslike.
Of course, without context or audience, any wording we
propose is just wild speculation.

Jim Shaeffer (jims -at- spsi -dot- com)

> -----Original Message-----
> Could someone help me to rephrase the following sentence to
> something a little more businesslike:
> "The beauty of option 1 is XYZ."


A landmark hotel, one of America's most beautiful cities, and
three and a half days of immersion in the state of the art:
IPCC 01, Oct. 24-27 in Santa Fe.

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