Re: I like mine better, but I don't know why.

Subject: Re: I like mine better, but I don't know why.
From: kcronin -at- daleen -dot- com
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Thu, 17 Jan 2002 09:59:22 -0700

John-

What if you just changed the intro line to allow your bullets to make more
grammatical sense?

Example:

This new process enables your business to:
- Improve adherence to corporate discount policies
- Automate workflow of schedule of authorization table lookup to:
- Confirm Level of authorization
- etc.....


If you're a stickler for always introducing lists with a complete
sentence, you could write something like this:

This new process enables your business to do the following:
- Improve adherence to corporate discount policies
- Automate workflow of schedule of authorization table lookup to:
- Confirm Level of authorization
- etc.....

Hope this helps!



- Keith Cronin

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