Another Grammar Question

Subject: Another Grammar Question
From: Dharlene Valeda <DValeda -at- descartes -dot- com>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Thu, 13 Jun 2002 16:49:14 -0400

Hi Tamara,

The two sentences mean quite different things. Try rewriting without using
the word only:

Tamara's sentence: Factors that are the same across all pipelines and
companies are only included in this form.

Tamara's meaning: You will find these factors in this form exclusively, and
not on any other form.

Summer Students: Only factors that are the same across all pipelines and
internal companies are included in this form.

Student's meaning: You will find factors that are the same across all
pipelines on this form, but not factors which are unique to a particular

Dharlene Valeda
dvaleda -at- descartes -dot- com
(519) 746-8110 X2275

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