RE: Another Subjective View

Subject: RE: Another Subjective View
From: Price Lisa - IL <PRICEL -at- tusc -dot- com>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Mon, 24 Jun 2002 13:44:40 -0500

I think either one works, and have seen both.

If this is in a step-action table, or numbered list, you can delete the
offending word, because the steps imply that you must install the thigamagig
before proceeding.

-----Original Message-----
From: Kim Roper [mailto:kim -dot- roper -at- vitana -dot- com]
Sent: Monday, June 24, 2002 1:39 PM
Subject: RE: Another Subjective View

Tom Green asked:

> The suspect is the use of "Once" as opposed to "When."
> Here's an example..."Once the thigamagig is installed...blah, blah,
> blah."
> I prefer to use "When the thigamagig is installed...blah, blah,
> blah." Which is right? or are both right?

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