Re: More on drafts --

Subject: Re: More on drafts --
From: "Bonnie Granat" <bgranat -at- editors-writers -dot- info>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Mon, 23 Sep 2002 15:01:46 -0400

> >
> > I'd make a slight change...
> >
> > "If you misrepresent the conditions under which my work will
> > be evaluated, then you are unethical."
> Yes, Kevin, your version removes the
> loaded language and it's better!

This is funny. I reversed the two versions in my mind. I think I prefer the
version that does not immediately accuse the person of misrepresentation, so
I would say "do not tell me".

Bonnie Granat

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