RE:What is wrong with the sentence

Subject: RE:What is wrong with the sentence
From: "Damien Braniff" <Damien -dot- Braniff -at- asg -dot- com>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Thu, 14 Apr 2005 14:45:42 +0100


The aim should always be clear communication. I've re-written numerous
sentences over the years simply because they didn't 'read well', even if
grammatically correct. I'd re-write so that it flows and the reader
doesn't have to stop and think about what it means.

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