Re: "Appears" vs. "will appear"

["Mike Starr" <mikestarr-techwr-l -at- writestarr -dot- com>]

I've never been afraid to use more words than absolutely necessary in the 
interest of clarity.

Mike
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From: "Ron Hearn" <RHearn -at- cucbc -dot- com>
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Sent: Thursday, May 03, 2007 12:28 PM
Subject: RE: "Appears" vs. "will appear"

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> Some would say that it requires more words than necessary.
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> Choose the File>>Save menu item. <software product> displays the Save
> dialog box.
>
> What's wrong with that??
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> From: "Sarah Bouchier" <Sarah -dot- Bouchier -at- exony -dot- com>
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> Subject: RE: "Appears" vs. "will appear"
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>> >I use "displays" instead of "appears." But I have no good reason why.
>>>Just a preference.
>>
>> The problem I always have with that is that when I see a sentence such
>
>> as 'Click X.  The X window displays' I mentally wait to find out what
>> it is that the X window displays.
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>> Sarah Bouchier
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