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> Without any further context, how would you revise the following?
> When a loop is running, once the first loop is completed, the lines in
> the loop are not editable anymore." My revision: "When a loop is
> running, you cannot edit the lines in the loop after the first loop is
"After a loop completes one iteration, its lines cannot be edited
until the loop is stopped."
> Or revise this sentence: "For submitted sequences, all lines are
> editable." My revision: "You can edit all lines for submitted
"All lines of a submitted sequence are editable."
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