RE: How would you revise?

Subject: RE: How would you revise?
From: "Andrew Warren" <awarren -at- synaptics -dot- com>
To: "Ben" <baj357 -at- gmail -dot- com>, "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Wed, 18 Jul 2007 17:19:28 -0700

Ben wrote:

> Without any further context, how would you revise the following?
> When a loop is running, once the first loop is completed, the lines in
> the loop are not editable anymore." My revision: "When a loop is
> running, you cannot edit the lines in the loop after the first loop is
> completed."

"After a loop completes one iteration, its lines cannot be edited
until the loop is stopped."

> Or revise this sentence: "For submitted sequences, all lines are
> editable." My revision: "You can edit all lines for submitted
> sequences."

"All lines of a submitted sequence are editable."


=== Andrew Warren - awarren -at- synaptics -dot- com
=== Synaptics, Inc - Santa Clara, CA

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