RE: levels of detail -- are we beyond this?

["Lauren" <lauren -at- writeco -dot- net>]

Instruction #5 should state, "Repeat once."  For the absence of one
four-letter word, the Hollywood divette shampooed her hair until she was
bald...

Lauren

> From: Doug Grossman

> The shampoo instructions also need to say when you can stop. 
> If you always follow Instruction #5, you'd be shampooing 
> until it was all gone and then have to run out to the store 
> to get another bottle so that you could continue. You'd have 
> very clean hair, but not much of a life otherwise.
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Butler, Darren

> Instructions:
> 
> 1.  Wet hair thoroughly with warm water
> 
> 2.  Apply a generous amount of Mr. Andre's 
> SuperModel-Strength, Anti-Sludge Shampoo (with kumquat & 
> alfalfa extracts)
> 
> 3.  Gently Wash hair
> 
> 4.  Rinse
> 
> 5.  Repeat
> 
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