RE: levels of detail -- are we beyond this?

Subject: RE: levels of detail -- are we beyond this?
From: "Combs, Richard" <richard -dot- combs -at- Polycom -dot- com>
To: "Downing, David" <DavidDowning -at- Users -dot- com>, <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Tue, 19 Aug 2008 09:42:17 -0600

Downing, David wrote:

> Regarding the shampoo instructions that were being discussed on Friday
> lather, rinse, repeat -- you don't really need to repeat. Once is
> enough. I submit that this last "instruction" is actually a piece of
> propaganda intended to sell twice as much shampoo.

My current shampoo (Melaleuca Original) says, "Repeat if desired" -- a
refreshing acknowledgement that this step is entirely optional. Plus, it
addresses the "endless loop" issue that someone was concerned about. :-)


Richard G. Combs
Senior Technical Writer
Polycom, Inc.
richardDOTcombs AT polycomDOTcom
rgcombs AT gmailDOTcom


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