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> .com] On Behalf Of Leonard C. Porrello
> Sent: Thursday, August 28, 2008 2:27 PM
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> Subject: Grammer question
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> I can't decide which of the following two expression is preferable:
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> A. You can run ingest jobs from any computer that meets
> requirements in
> your network.
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> Vs.
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> B. You can run ingest jobs from any computer in your network
> that meets
> requirements.
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> The requirements mentioned pertain to the computer, not the network.
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The computer has requirements? What kind of computer has "requirements"
other than that it has an operating system? Requirements for *what*? That a
sentient being be using it? That it be plugged into a power source? Neither
statement's meaning clear to me. Nor is your sentence explaining whose
requirements you're talking about. Now maybe I'm just too non-techie to get
it, but I am perplexed about what you might even be referring to.
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