RE: Need some opinions on phrasing

Subject: RE: Need some opinions on phrasing
From: "Sarah Blake" <Sarah -dot- Blake -at- microfocus -dot- com>
To: "Techwr-l" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Thu, 29 Jan 2009 09:34:54 -0000

> Legal's point of view is that the phrasing "at
> least VaporWare 2.7" only states that versions
> before 2.7 won't work and that version 2.7 will.

If that's what they want to say, then why not 'This feature works with
VaporWare 2.7'? It doesn't deny the possibility that it works with
other versions of VaporWare, but it doesn't raise the customer's hopes
that it might, either :)

S.

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References:
Re: Need some opinions on phrasing: From: Stuart Burnfield
Re: Need some opinions on phrasing: From: Janice Gelb
RE: Need some opinions on phrasing: From: Sarah Blake
Re: Need some opinions on phrasing: From: Janice Gelb

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