Re: Wrong? Poor style? OK?

Subject: Re: Wrong? Poor style? OK?
From: voxwoman <voxwoman -at- gmail -dot- com>
To: Nancy Allison <maker -at- verizon -dot- net>
Date: Tue, 24 Mar 2009 10:18:42 -0400

On Tue, Mar 24, 2009 at 10:05 AM, Nancy Allison <maker -at- verizon -dot- net> wrote:
> Does this sentence violate a grammatical principle, is it stylistically
> poor, or is it OK, in your opinion:
> "There are two ways to control how test results are saved."

What about

"There are two ways to save test results." ?


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