RE: Wrong? Poor style? OK?

Subject: RE: Wrong? Poor style? OK?
From: Susan Tamaoki <tamaoki_s -at- yahoo -dot- com>
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Date: Thu, 26 Mar 2009 10:33:58 -0700 (PDT)

I would rewrite the sentence to something like:
To
 
I have a rule of my own to avoid starting a sentence with THERE IS, THERE ARE. RE: Wrong? Poor style? OK?
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> > Does this sentence violate a grammatical principle, is it stylistically
> > poor, or is it OK, in your opinion:
> >
> > "There are two ways to control how test results are saved."
>
> What about
>
> "There are two ways to save test results." ?


Susan Kohl Tamaoki
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