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Subject:Re: Periods and bullets From:Janice Gelb <Janice -dot- Gelb -at- Sun -dot- COM> To:Techwr-l <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com> Date:Thu, 02 Apr 2009 10:25:22 +1100
John Posada wrote:
> Hi, guys...I'm having a discussion with another writer.
>
> My position is that a bullet list of gragments gets no period:
>
> The crate had
> - oranges
> - apples
> - lemons
>
> and her position is that the last bullet gets a period.
>
> The crate had
> - oranges
> - apples
> - lemons.
>
> Any validity to this?
>
Most modern style goes with your example, only perhaps
with a more grammatically complete lead-in: "The crate
contained the following items:"
I believe the only time the last item should end with
a period is if the list is using the style where the
items complete the intro grammatically, in which case
I think the other items get ending punctuation as well:
The crate had
- oranges,
- apples, and
- lemons.
-- Janice
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