RE: Appropriate -- so inappropriate!

Subject: RE: Appropriate -- so inappropriate!
From: "Combs, Richard" <richard -dot- combs -at- Polycom -dot- com>
To: "Janice Gelb" <Janice -dot- Gelb -at- Sun -dot- COM>, <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Mon, 13 Jul 2009 08:12:58 -0600

Janice Gelb wrote:

> It's the "one you want" part that I don't think
> is necessary. "In the Display window, set your
> color preferences" seems fine to me. Saying
> "In the Display window, choose the color settings
> that you want to use" is the wording that I think
> is superfluous.

But "preference" is just another way of saying "the one you want."

Richard


Richard G. Combs
Senior Technical Writer
Polycom, Inc.
richardDOTcombs AT polycomDOTcom
303-223-5111
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References:
Appropriate -- so inappropriate!: From: Nancy Allison
RE: Appropriate -- so inappropriate!: From: Stephen Arrants
Re: Appropriate -- so inappropriate!: From: Janice Gelb
Re: Appropriate -- so inappropriate!: From: Gene Kim-Eng
Re: Appropriate -- so inappropriate!: From: Janice Gelb

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