RE: Teaching a practical business writing class and looking for professional rubrics

Subject: RE: Teaching a practical business writing class and looking for professional rubrics
From: "Leonard C. Porrello" <Leonard -dot- Porrello -at- SoleraTec -dot- com>
To: "Jona Steenbrink" <jsteenbrink -at- bluefinrobotics -dot- com>
Date: Mon, 17 Aug 2009 14:00:48 -0700

Perhaps you can provide a concise alternative?



Leonard

________________________________

From: Jona Steenbrink [mailto:jsteenbrink -at- bluefinrobotics -dot- com]
Sent: Monday, August 17, 2009 1:19 PM
To: Leonard C. Porrello
Cc: techwr-l List
Subject: Re: Teaching a practical business writing class and looking for
professional rubrics



Perhaps you should really stress avoiding verbosity. The difficulty in
avoiding it is amply demonstrated by the following sentence (as well as
in this sentence, in fact):



Using overly verbose/flowery language that's trying to be clever





;)



Regards,



Jona



Jona Steenbrink

Technical Writer

Bluefin Robotics

www.bluefinrobotics.com











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References:
Teaching a practical business writing class and looking for professional rubrics: From: Rob Hudson
Re: Teaching a practical business writing class and looking for professional rubrics: From: voxwoman
RE: Teaching a practical business writing class and looking for professional rubrics: From: Leonard C. Porrello
Re: Teaching a practical business writing class and looking for professional rubrics: From: Jona Steenbrink

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