status and state?

Subject: status and state?
From: Praneeta Paradkar <praneeta_paradkar -at- yahoo -dot- com>
To: TECHWR-L -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com
Date: Mon, 26 Oct 2009 15:58:03 +0530 (IST)

Hi All,
 
I have sentence here:
 





Created

This is the status when a notice is created. In this status, the notice can be edited or deleted.
 
I would like to rewrite the second sentence as: In this state, the notice can be edited or deleted. Would that change the meaning? Technically or nontechnically?
 
In this status somehow sounds a bit awkward to me.
 
Thanks,
 
Praneeta


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