Re: Grammar - The Gotcha Microsoft Gives

Subject: Re: Grammar - The Gotcha Microsoft Gives
From: reshma pendse <reshma_pendse -at- yahoo -dot- co -dot- in>
To: techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com
Date: Thu, 8 Sep 2011 13:02:39 +0530 (IST)

I tried typing the text and Word 2007 did not raise a flag for this one. My language is set to US English.
 
regards,
Reshma

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From: William Sherman <bsherman77 -at- embarqmail -dot- com>
Subject: Re: Grammar - The Gotcha Microsoft Gives
To: techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com
Date: Thursday, 8 September, 2011, 4:57 AM


You should see some of what comes through in these documents.  I don't like "the user" when it is really "the customer". Didn't "user" go out after Tron 29 years ago? Maybe this is why customer service is such a [sarcasm]wonderful[/sarcasm] experience, is that many in these service desks read these types of guides and think of them as "users" rather than "customers" who deserve respect for buying the product in the first place.

However, these documents have been through an approval process, and cannot be changed except for obvious and terrible spelling errors.  Sad, but true.

Remember, anyone can write. We learned how in third grade.

All I get to do is publish them online. I'm not here for my writing talents; I'm only here for my online publishing talents.  There are some changes we make, in hopes we don't get caught, but few. If we get caught, the higher ups want to know why we were changing approved material.




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Sent: Wednesday, September 07, 2011 4:43 PM
Subject: RE: Grammar - The Gotcha Microsoft Gives


When I first read the sentence, I thought the issue would be that 'the user' != 'them'.

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Sent: Wednesday, September 07, 2011 12:33 PM
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Subject: Grammar - The Gotcha Microsoft Gives

I have a line in a manual:

If the user calls in for ticket status, please advise them to contact ...


I click on advise to see why Microsoft is flagging it.

They say it should be advice.  So according to Microsoft, I am confused and I really need to put a noun in where I have a verb.

Hmmmm.

Oh well, anyone can write. Especially with Microsoft correcting spelling and grammar for you.

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