RE: introducing steps

Subject: RE: introducing steps
From: "Al Geist" <al -dot- geist -at- geistassociates -dot- com>
To: "'Becca'" <becca_price -at- yahoo -dot- com>, <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Mon, 17 Oct 2011 21:53:50 -0400

To me, I don't see any need for "follow these steps." Of course you would
follow the following steps, in my opinion "follow these steps" identifies
the obvious. (However, she "is the teacher.") In my opinion a better way to
state this would be to say "Use the following procedure to install Sigil."

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