Re: What's wrong with this headline?

Subject: Re: What's wrong with this headline?
From: John Allred <jack -at- allrednet -dot- com>
To: techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com
Date: Tue, 12 Jun 2012 11:58:21 -0500

Sorry if I'm taking this out of context. Aside from the bad spelling,
is this whole thing a headline? Seems more like a story. Maybe the text
beginning with Donald Trump is a subhead. Still wordy as all get out.
"Obama & Romney campaigns plagued by surprise attacks"
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On 6/12/2012 10:58 AM, Al Geist wrote:

Had to read it twice before I caught the typo.... Good one

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Subject: What's wrong with this headline?

Grrrrr....

>From the NYDailyNews.com site:

President Obama, Mitt Romney campaigns plauged by surprise attacks from
supposed allies Donald Trump, Bill Clinton inadvertently hamper candidates
their supposed to be helping




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