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Subject:Re: Another way to say High-Performance From:Lisa G Wright <writingweb -at- gmail -dot- com> To:"Bruce Megan (ST-CO/ENS2.5-NA)" <Megan -dot- Bruce -at- us -dot- bosch -dot- com> Date:Tue, 9 Oct 2012 11:45:04 -0500
One situation where it would not be appropriate to change that phrase,
where it does have meaning, is if you're writing about "high-performance
computing." It's unclear to me from the example you provided, but it's
something to consider.
Lisa
On Mon, Oct 8, 2012 at 2:47 PM, Bruce Megan (ST-CO/ENS2.5-NA) <
Megan -dot- Bruce -at- us -dot- bosch -dot- com> wrote:
> Hello All:
>
> I have the following sentence that I want to change the phrase
> High-Performance….
> Any thoughts?
>
> …. a high-performance standards-based, routable IP media transport system.
>
> Thanks,
> Megan
>
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