RE: What to call this thing?

Subject: RE: What to call this thing?
From: "McLauchlan, Kevin" <Kevin -dot- McLauchlan -at- safenet-inc -dot- com>
To: Stuart Burnfield <slb -at- westnet -dot- com -dot- au>, Techwr-l <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Thu, 1 Aug 2013 09:08:20 -0400

Thanks, guys.

That one [more than] covers the landscape. I'm using it.


On a side note, d'ya ever get the impression that some organizations don't WANT you to find your way around their sites?
Or that others are so enamored of their spiffy look-and-feel that they want to trap you into spending as much time as possible gazing upon its magnificence?



-----Original Message-----
From: Stuart Burnfield
Sent: July-30-13 9:54 PM
To: Techwr-l
Subject: RE: What to call this thing?

Like Tim Slager, my first thought was "categories".

> I might try something like:
> "From the row of device categories, select HSM."

It is a very busy page, though, and someone coming to the page cold (without your instructions) might struggle to find the HSM link. How about this belt-and-braces approach:

"From the row of device categories (PIN Acceptance Devices, Non PED, HSM, SCR), select HSM."

Stuart



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