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Of course, you could substitute "listed", "shown", "stated" or another similar word for the word "detailed", but that's my suggestion.
-- Ken in Atlanta
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> From: Barbara Philbrick <caslon -at- windstream -dot- net>
>To: "techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
>Sent: Friday, October 11, 2013 9:07 AM
>Subject: Perform vs. do
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>Our writing group is trying to decide if we should start using "do" instead of "perform" for lead-in statements to procedures.
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>For example:
>"To set the language, do the following steps:"
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>compared to:
>"To set the language, perform the following steps:"
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>Using "do" sounds odd to our ears, but plain language guidelines recommend it and we can't find any grammatical reason why it's wrong.
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>Another consideration is that our audience is heavily English as second language readers (especially Asian languages).
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>Have any of you found substantive reasons to use one or the other?
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>Thanks!
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>Barb
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