RE: Re: Bad sentence #2

Subject: RE: Re: Bad sentence #2
From: Lynne Wright <Lynne -dot- Wright -at- tritech -dot- com>
To: Nancy Allison <maker -at- verizon -dot- net>, "margaret -dot- cekis -at- comcast -dot- net" <margaret -dot- cekis -at- comcast -dot- net>
Date: Fri, 29 May 2015 20:04:26 +0000

Its still in passive voice, tho.

And isn't starting the sentence with "Use of" instead of "The use of" grammatically incorrect?

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Subject: Re: Re: Bad sentence #2

Margaret, your entry is both grammatically correct AND pleasing to the
engineering mind!

"Use of USB communications to control the instrument running v. 4.1
firmware requires the installation of USB?? drivers."
Margaret Cekis, Johns Creek GA
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