RE: Configuration

Subject: RE: Configuration
From: "Bruce Megan (ST-CO/MKW-NA)" <Megan -dot- Bruce -at- us -dot- bosch -dot- com>
To: Tony Chung <tonyc -at- tonychung -dot- ca>, "TechWhirl (techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com)" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Thu, 29 Jun 2017 14:59:49 +0000

Hi Tony,
I would do that normallyâ.but this is a marketing fluff sell sheet that should focus on the glitz and glamour of what the machine does.

Not my favorite kind of writing.

Best regards

Megan Bruce

Technical Writers-North America (ST-CO/MKW-NA)
Robert Bosch LLC | 12000 Portland Ave. S. | Burnsville MN 55337 USA | USA | www.bosch.us<http://www.bosch.us>
Tel. +1 952 736-3910 | Megan -dot- Bruce -at- us -dot- bosch -dot- com<mailto:Megan -dot- Bruce -at- us -dot- bosch -dot- com>


From: Tony Chung [mailto:tonyc -at- tonychung -dot- ca]
Sent: Thursday, June 29, 2017 9:57 AM
To: Bruce Megan (ST-CO/MKW-NA) <Megan -dot- Bruce -at- us -dot- bosch -dot- com>; TechWhirl (techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com) <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Subject: Re: Configuration

".... another way to support the most common setup and configuration tasks" ?

I'd focus more on what the user needs to do, and cut back on words.

Tony

On Thu, Jun 29, 2017 at 07:48 Bruce Megan (ST-CO/MKW-NA) <Megan -dot- Bruce -at- us -dot- bosch -dot- com<mailto:Megan -dot- Bruce -at- us -dot- bosch -dot- com>> wrote:
Hello All:
I have checked all the thesaurus sites I can think of and have hit a mental block....
In the following sentence I want to replace one of the instances of configuration. Any suggestions?

"....as an alternative configuration option supporting the most common setup and configuration tasks"
Thanks
Megan

Best regards

Megan Bruce

Technical Writers-North America (ST-CO/MKW-NA)
Robert Bosch LLC | 12000 Portland Ave. S. | Burnsville MN 55337 USA | USA | www.bosch.us<http://www.bosch.us><http://www.bosch.us>
Tel. +1 952 736-3910 | Megan -dot- Bruce -at- us -dot- bosch -dot- com<mailto:Megan -dot- Bruce -at- us -dot- bosch -dot- com><mailto:Megan -dot- Bruce -at- us -dot- bosch -dot- com<mailto:Megan -dot- Bruce -at- us -dot- bosch -dot- com>>


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Configuration: From: Bruce Megan (ST-CO/MKW-NA)
Re: Configuration: From: Tony Chung

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