Re: Re[2]: More allergic reactions... How would you...?

Subject: Re: Re[2]: More allergic reactions... How would you...?
From: Steven Youra <sjy3 -at- CORNELL -dot- EDU>
Date: Fri, 21 Jan 1994 09:23:33 -0500

>> "CAUTION--RISK OF FIRE
>> DO NOT OPERATE HEATER WITHOUT FEET ATTACHED
>> IN CORRECT POSITION"
>>
>>How would you clarify the caution above without getting
>>too verbose?

> >"CAUTION--RISK OF FIRE
> >BE SURE THE HEATER'S FEET ARE ATTACHED
> >IN CORRECT POSITION DURING OPERATION"

>or call the heater's feet "base":

>"Be sure the base is attached in correct position during operation"

--or: "Position base correctly before operating heater."

--Steven
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Steven Youra, Director
Engineering Communications Program
Cornell University Tel. 607. 255.7199
Ithaca, NY 14853 FAX 607. 255.9606
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