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Subject:Re: The use of indicate From:Len Olszewski <saslpo -at- UNX -dot- SAS -dot- COM> Date:Thu, 3 Feb 1994 12:58:54 -0500
John P. Eldard wants to replace a word:
> What would you use in the following example to replace "indicated"?
> Measure voltage at test point indicated on computer screen.
Eliminate it.
"Measure voltage using the test point on the computer screen."
No charge.
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