Re: a poser

Subject: Re: a poser
From: Kelly Hoffman <kelly -at- NASHUA -dot- HP -dot- COM>
Date: Fri, 11 Mar 1994 17:43:01 EST

Many thanks to everyone who suggested alternatives for my "poser"
sentence. I had been staring at the problem so long that I couldn't
think straight. My writer's block seems to have subsided, at least
for now :-), and I've been remarkably productive this afternoon.

Len's suggestion fit my particular circumstances the closest, so I
took his idea and ran with it. (He suggested reframing the sentence
with "traffic assignment" as the subject.)

Because of peculiar context -- which I omitted to spare you some
tedium -- breaking out the clauses of the sentence with bullets or a
similar device didn't work well.

It was great to have several different and fresh points of view to
break me out of this rut.

Thanks again!

Kelly K. Hoffman kelly -at- nashua -dot- hp -dot- com
Learning Products Engineer
Hewlett-Packard, Network Test Division "Reading the manual is
One Tara Blvd., Nashua, NH USA 03062 admitting defeat."

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