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Subject:Re: Writing simple procedures From:Karen Kay <karenk -at- NETCOM -dot- COM> Date:Thu, 4 May 1995 22:23:13 -0700
Arthur Comings said:
> > 1. Click on the YYY icon in the XXX toolbox.
> I try to keep each step as simple as possible, so the "on ... in" in
> your combined step pushes the limits for me, but it does the job, and
> keeps the total number of steps down. Just moving the cursor isn't
> generally worth a separate step.
What about saying "Click on the XXX toolbox YYY icon."??