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Subject: boom
From: Jan Boomsliter <boom -at- CADENCE -dot- COM>
Date: Fri, 4 Aug 1995 10:03:40 -0700

Can't pass up a challenge like this!

There are two points in this sentence:

The framis contains whoosies that are used in the whizbang.

A thingy has to be developed for the framis.

Why does a thingy "have to" be developed? Is it necessary in order for
the framis to hold the whoosies? If not, the first sentence alone is
sufficient. If so, then you must tell us what to do about developing
the thingy.

Good grief. I'm worn out, aren't you?


jb
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The user manual I'm editing has this sentence:


In addition, the framis requires a thingy to have been developed, using the
whatsis tool, that contains whoosies to be used in the whizbang.

(It's the framis that contains the whoosies, and the whoosies that are being
used in the whizbang.)

Help!

TIA
Stacey Kahn
SKahn -at- wb -dot- com


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