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From: Richard Mateosian <srm -at- C2 -dot- ORG>
Date: Thu, 1 Feb 1996 19:24:12 -0800

> 1. The record description is a text entry which has no conditional
> logic.

> 2. The record description is a text entry which does not have
> conditional logic.

If this is not a definition, as seems likely from the context, the sentence
should be something like "The record description is a text entry. It
contains no conditional logic."

Both of your sentences are grammatically correct, but you need a comma
before "which," because the clause is non-restrictive. ...RM

Richard Mateosian http://www.c2.org/~srm/ President, Berkeley STC
Freelance Technical Writer srm -at- c2 -dot- org Review Editor, IEEE Micro

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