Help with sentence

Subject: Help with sentence
From: Mike Ingram <MIngram -at- SCIENTECH -dot- COM>
Date: Wed, 30 Oct 1996 12:17:42 -0700

Sue Heim wrote:

I swear my brain has decided to turn off today. Which of the
following is correct:

...more may be required if a high number of records *is* retrieved
...more may be required if a high number of records *are* retrieved

While I realize there are many "authorities", Theodore Bernstein addresses
exactly this in The Careful Writer. He says, "If the idea of oneness
predominates, treat the noun as a singular. ('The number of accidents is
larger this year'--because _number_ is thought of as _total_.) If the idea
of more-than-oneness predominates, treat the noun as a plural. ('A great
number of accidents are preventable'--because _number_ is equivalent to
_many_.) With _number_ or _total_, incidentally, a simple rule is possible:
preceded by _the_, it is singular; preceded by _a_, it is plural."

Perhaps other "authorities" would give different guidance, but here's one to
chew on.


Mike Ingram, Senior Writer/Editor
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