Passive Sentences

Subject: Passive Sentences
From: Theresa Perkins <tperkins -at- LEXMARK -dot- COM>
Date: Fri, 8 Nov 1996 14:57:56 EST

Elaine wrote asking how to improve this sentence:

"For data reduction, the desired quantity is the response of the band
after the out-of-band has been removed."

What about:

To reduce data, remove the out-of-band [my note: the out of band what?], then
measure the band response quality.


--Theresa


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