Product packaging

Subject: Product packaging
From: geoff-h -at- MTL -dot- FERIC -dot- CA
Date: Tue, 1 Apr 1997 13:13:28 -0600

Dan Roberts looked for alternatives to <<Product F is
separately packaged within Product W>> and <<Product E is
separately packaged within Product W>>

How about: "The package for Product W includes separate
copies of..."?

--Geoff Hart @8^{)} geoff-h -at- mtl -dot- feric -dot- ca
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