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Lauren Gotlieb wrote:
> Hello all,
> I have a question about introducing bulleted lists. Does the phrase
> the list need to be a complete sentence? I generally write:
> "You use blah-blah to:
> Is this incorrect?
Hello, Lauren: Although I have seen this type of list many times, I
don't use it, and I edit it out of manuscripts when I have the chance. I
regard this structure as ungrammatical for two reasons.
1. You have broken an infinitive verb in half. The "to" needs to be next
to the verb as in "to display" or "to execute." In your example, "to" is
not a preposition; it is part of a verb.
2. You don't need any punctuation between the first part of a sentence
and the second part. When each list item completes the sentence, a colon
Best regards...Peggy Schillinger
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