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> You won't solve the problem by writing "The dialog box displays" or any =
> other ungrammatical construction. Every intelligent reader will ask, =
> "Displays what?" And the hypothetical dumb readers who will be mystified =
> by "The dialog box appears," and look for it to appear in the =
> refrigerator, will go to the same refrigerator to watch the dialog box =
> display.
>
> Doug Parr
> The Write Place
>
Yikes. For someone who uses a verb as a modifier, you're sure intense on
these matters of correctness.<g>
Hyperbole aside, I think its more a matter of familiarity (perhaps dialect?)
instead of intelligence. I have no doubt this form will become more
"correct" rather than less. At this point, though, it doesn't work for me.
I'll make no claims about its correctness.
I liked Mike Huber's contribution to the use of "display," posted on
techcomm. Mike, could you post it here?
Bill Burns
ILE Communications/Eccentric Technology Consultant
billdb -at- ile -dot- com
> You can't gouge out your mind's eye.
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