Re: "Wish" in tech docs

Subject: Re: "Wish" in tech docs
From: Suzette Seveny <sseveny -at- PETVALU -dot- COM>
Date: Tue, 21 Jul 1998 14:56:19 -0400

How about:

... click on the Destination you want to edit (although I prefer "select")


To edit a Destination, select (or click on) the desired Destination from the list.

Suzette Seveny
Markham, Ontario, Canada
sseveny -at- petvalu -dot- com or suzette -at- yesic -dot- com

Gina Hertel wrote:
> In my response to my previous example, some list members said they would not
> use the word "wish" in technical documentation. How would you rephrase
> this, for example?
> Step 1: From the Destination List, click on the Destination you "wish" to
> edit.

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