Re: Phrasing Question

Subject: Re: Phrasing Question
From: John Posada <jposada01 -at- YAHOO -dot- COM>
Date: Fri, 21 May 1999 09:35:34 -0700

I use phrasing similar to the following:

"Unless you have experience installing software,
Western Union recommends that you accept the default
name or location."


> >Currently the manual reads, "We recommend that you
> do not change the user
> >name and leave the default." The "We recommend"
> part is where I shudder

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