RE: to be versus ing

Subject: RE: to be versus ing
From: "Kathi Jan Knill" <Kathi -dot- Knill -at- template -dot- com>
To: "Brierley, Sean" <Sean -at- Quodata -dot- Com>, "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Wed, 29 Dec 1999 12:18:33 -0500

How about:

"You may need to manually update the software tables."

Active voice?

Otherwise:
"Software tables may need manual updating."

Kathi Jan Knill
Sr. Technical Writer
Template Software
Kathi -dot- Knill -at- Template -dot- com
I glory in this world of men and women, torn with troubles, yet
living on to love and laugh through it all. ~ Carl Sandburg ~





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