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Subject:RE: On Avoiding Gender Bias From:"Secara, Maggie" <Maggie -dot- Secara -at- indymacbank -dot- com> To:"TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com> Date:Thu, 13 Dec 2001 08:21:52 -0800
Or: Everyone who wants to use the facility must bring an ID card.
(I'm going to asssume the reader knows to bring his/herr own card, not some
If you want to use the facility, please bring your I.D. card.
Second person/present tense/active voice
> -----Original Message-----
> From: renee -at- e-sim -dot- co -dot- il [mailto:renee -at- e-sim -dot- co -dot- il]
> Sent: Thursday, December 13, 2001 1:55 AM
> To: TECHWR-L
> Subject: Re: On Avoiding Gender Bias
> Why not rephrase the sentence:
> People (students) who want to use this facility should bring
> their ID cards.
> Renee Rothberg
> e-SIM Ltd.
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