RE: Another Grammar Question

Subject: RE: Another Grammar Question
From: "Andrew Dugas" <dugas -at- intalio -dot- com>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Thu, 13 Jun 2002 14:12:01 -0700

I second the others that the summer student's grammar take is better.

However, I find the sentence structure mangled and lacking in clarity. I
would reword it along these lines:

"This form includes only the factors that are the same across all pipelines
and internal companies."

My .02


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