re anybody...see wrong...

Subject: re anybody...see wrong...
From: "James Jones" <doc-x -at- earthlink -dot- net>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Mon, 29 Nov 2004 09:12:26 -0600


> Gentlemen
> If there is anything wrong in this rest room, please notify
> the attendant in the women's rest room.

They could have made it clearer, like:

If you see anything wrong in this rest room, please tell
the attendant, who is usually in the women's rest room.

Or

If you see anything wrong in this rest room, please tell
the attendant, whose room is next to the women's rest room.

Jim Jones

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